Teacher's Comments

You have done some good research and planning so far and have a clear idea of a specific target audience and how you intend to make a magazine to specifically appeal to them. Try to avoid brief or vague comments (like with the readership figures).

Whenever you post any information always evaluate it in as much detail as possible using whichever key concepts are relevant and as much media terminology as possible.

You have not posted since early february. Remember to keep on posting during the production process and discuss what skills you have learnt and any problems you have overcome.

Mr Birtwell